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You smiled lightly, acknowledging that your boyfriend, Gilbert, was standing across from you in the train. His hand embracing the railing and texting at the same time.

You took out your phone as you received a text almost instantaneously.

"Fancy meeting you here, beautiful." The two of you exchanged smiles as you texted back.

"Yes, the awesome Gilbert. I didn't know you took this train. Didn't you always take the R?"

You shoved the phone back into your pocket as you heard him snap his fingers, noticing that he motioned for you to check the device again.

"Train was dead halfway down Lineyard Street station ): -"  You stopped reading once noticing his unhappy emoticon and smiled. He rarely used them because they were 'un-awesome', he said. "So they told us to transfer to the D. Apparently it's magical and it goes where I need it to be, which is awesome; but not as awesome as I am though."

"Of course, no one is as awesome as you, right? By the way, why aren't we talking out loud, Gil?"

Gilbert trailed closer as he flicked your nose. "I have no idea why, but that was awesome." You patted his silver white hair, then went on to massage his neck.

"Yes," you agreed reluctantly. "That was enjoyable. Plus, we're going into the tunnel anyways. Either way, you're going to have to talk to me; even if you didn't want to." Gilbert quickly looked around stalking for seats, not replying.

"There's two seats, let's go." You let Gilbert drag you to the seats as you sat down with him. You felt his hand intertwine with yours as you laid your head on his shoulder. Receiving stares from the people nearby was fun, especially with Gilbert by your side. You went into dreamland on Gilbert's shoulder.

...

"Frau," you felt Gil tap your shoulders as you opened your eyes looking into his red ones. "I'm almost at my stop." You heard the train doors open and close again.

"I'll see you at home, Gil."

"Ja. Ich liebe dich, (Name)," Gilbert leaned down to give you a kiss on your lips. It was always hot when Gilbert spoke in his native tongue. "I'll see you tonight." You laughed as the train approached the platform steadily.

"Ja," you gave German a little try. "Ich liebe dich auch*, Gilbert." You heard him hum in agreement and was pleased about your German pronunciations.

"Cook me an awesome dinner, won't you?" He asked before getting up.

"Yes, I will. Have an awesome day, Gilbert."

"Which day of mine hasn't been awesome with you?" He asked again as he was approaching the train door, getting ready to exit soon.

"Well I don't know what you're thinking..." You heard Gilbert laugh faintly as he walked off the train saying one last goodbye.

You shook your head as you threw yourself into deep thoughts.

You would see him again tonight, like every other night.

This was the perfect relationship that you had always yearned for.
This idea came from a couple on the subway who was facing each other but texting at the same time. I personally thought it was so cute... THEREFORE IT HAS COME TO THIS.

Must thank them two for the inspiration. -bows-

They really had the perfect relationship which was absolutely adorable!

You (c) :iconprussiawinkplz:
Prussia (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:
Plot (c) Me.

* - Ich liebe dich auch. - I love you too.
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ThatOneNerdChick13 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  New member
OMG. AWWWWWWWW *several hours latér* WWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwww....
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poop4689 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years

plz don't judge me on this it was a dare

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kiyorihiroshi1234 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
this is how i agree on how cute this relationship may be if i saw one!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Definitely! Thank you!
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hedgehogs11 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

oh wait, wrong too

SORRY i was thinking of to! so sorry, great story by the way!

 

 

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hedgehogs11 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
auch also means also, zu is a more specific word meaning too (sorriez, i know some german)
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forevergotenandbra Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013   Writer
Oh so cute! :love:
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Aww :3
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aweiredkidnamedrain Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
eeee i feel special
...
not the bad kind tho
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's good! :D
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