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Nikolai followed the small footsteps printed onto the mud of the rainy disaster. It had poured until the dawn a night ago, and the trails from the fresh water could be sensed in the deadly air.

Nikolai stopped walking until he saw you stopped walking. It was his chance. He slowly walked behind you as his shadow overpower yours standing in front of him. It was as if his shadow was eating the weak without hesitation.

He creeped up quicker until...

"Surprise," he called behind you. "Were you afraid?" He blew softly into your left ear, chuckling as he did.

"Not in the slightest, Nikolai." You replied as you felt his lips turn into a pout. "Perhaps I have already gotten used to your plays."

"I'll try something else tomorrow, maybe." Nikolai began nipping at your ear. "Let's go home and make love."

"Are you crazy, Nikolai? That is not something you say out on the streets!" Nikolai looked around and shrugged his shoulders.

"Who cares?" He added as he tossed you over his shoulders. "No one is here. Hey, if you don't want to make love, we could always watch a movie, take a shower or a walk. Of course, I'd personally prefer the make love part. But you know, that's me."

"There's no cure for you, Nikolai." You added as he agreed. "Can't we just go home and cook up a bowl of borscht or something? At least that's something you know how to make for me." He placed you down at the entrance of the door as you opened the wooden entryway. Nikolai followed you into the house after shutting the door with his heel and trailed his way to the refrigerator.

"Yes milady. Getting to your borscht request." Nikolai emphasized the word borscht to signify a bit of displeasure. You wrapped your arms around his waist as he stirred the ingredients together in the small, boiling pot on the stove. Your head nuzzled against his firm back as he moved swiftly. "Come on, go sit at the table." Nikolai lifted up the pot and poured the texture into a bowl as he then carried it onto the wooden table. "Tell me how it is."

You lifted up the warm bowl to your lips as the fluid drift into your mouth. "It's creamy and very delicious. You always make the best borscht."

"Better than my sister's?"

"I don't think you even need to ask that question," you replied. "I love your borscht."

"And what about me?"

"Of course I love you too." Your small hand moved to fondle his cheeks as Nikolai smiled.

"Even if I creep up on you, and say weird things?" He continued to question as you nod. "Even if I say things I shouldn't be saying in public?" You nod again.

"I think that's all the reasons why I fell in love with you, ___________." He hesitated to speak further.

"I feel that way as well, Nikolai."

"And I think that's all the reasons why I am going to fall in love with you even more."

"Wh-" Nikolai shushed you by putting his index finger on your lips.

"You don't compare me to my sister or my brother, and I've never seen a girl like you. The others run when I come up behind them. I only try to be romantic, but I'm sort of hopeless at it. They want candlelight dinner, but I can barely make anything good except for borscht. They can't understand me when I'm speaking in my native tongue and tells me to speak English. They're all hypocritical bastards," Nikolai stops and moves his hand to stroke your hair softly. "Except for you." His eyes trail to find yours as he bend down beside you. "That's why I'm vowing to make sure that no one will hurt you as long as I'm here."

You murmur his name under your breath. Nikolai pulls out a small box out of his coat. "This isn't really expensive, to be honest. But it's very humble. I thought it would fit you well and I brought it for you when I was flying back to Belarus last month without you knowing." He opened the box with a small ring, embedded with small crystals and diamonds. "Allow me to protect you until the end of the time, ________...?"

"...Only if you creep up on me tomorrow again." Nikolai smiled as he slid the ring onto your finger of promise.

"Anytime." He leaned up to kiss you as he snaked his arms around your waist, and settled you on his lap. "Thank you for being there to cure my loneliness."
Commission from girafffecupcakes with Male!Belarus. I've never tried to write for the character, so it was a bit difficult on a first try. I apologize if he even is a bit OOC.

Please let me know how I can improve his character! Thank you~

DISCLAIMER:: I do not own Hetalia, or the characters. It belongs to Himaruya Hidekaz. I only own the plot and the story. Any similar plots are purely coincidental. Please do not steal work, and/or not give credit to me.
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Cu-bloo Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I like how you made him more playful and desperate rather than lonely and obsessive. :D
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dinoNUTSTAR Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student Artist
Aww niko! X3
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SkyeSteiner Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Student Writer
Awwww made my heart melt :iconblushplz:
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MadHatterAlice13 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute~
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Sweets-Delicious Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That. Was AMAZING.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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Sweets-Delicious Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problemo~♡u♡
I love your stories!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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Sweets-Delicious Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome! ^^
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chibi-germany7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwww so cute 
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)!
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ImmortalVantasy Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Dis is so CUTE!

You always make awesome stuff man (/•3•)/ 'hugs'
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh thank you! That means so so much! > 3< 
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ImmortalVantasy Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
Your welcome :3
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bluewolf165 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love male Belarus!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's my first time writing for him, I'm not sure how to feel.
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bluewolf165 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You did a great job!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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Bloodycherry7299 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
This is so freaking cute! > w < I thought you got Nikolai's personality just perfect! Great job! :D
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I thought he was OOC! >< What a huge relief!
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MishaWolf94 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing~ <3
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! 
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AkasunaYuki3 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Anytime Nikolai anytime
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed~
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AkasunaYuki3 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
Now.... Marry me marry me~
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Laufeyon Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student Writer
Wonderful! I really like how you write so descriptively. I think you nailed Nikolai's character very well, which is good.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! Ahhh, I tried! I thought he was OOC!
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girafffecupcakes Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Oh my HRE this is so sweet and I love it and everything! Thank you thank you thank you AWESOMENESS!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was my first time writing for a Nyo character, and I wasn't even sure if it was on point! Thank you!
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girafffecupcakes Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
It was perfect.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Was it? I'm so glad I didn't screw up... Thank you thank you!
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girafffecupcakes Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
No problem, keep being awesome! ^o^
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
;~; You too! I'll try to be awesome, or stay awesome.
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Emy069 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student General Artist
:iconclapplz: So cute >w<
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :)
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Emy069 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Student General Artist
Your welcome :3
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