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"That's the story of the General and the female soldier." 

"Aw," your thirteen years old child cooed. "They both died..."

"At least they were happy, right?" You heard keys jingle by the door as you turned to look, door opening to the tall blonde man. 

"I'm home." He declared, stripping his jacket and hanging it on the rack. Your daughter jumped down from the sofa and ran to her father's open embrace, giving him a peck on the cheek. 

"Mutti read me a story today of a female soldier and her General falling in love with her unconditionally, having no remorse till' the end and still loving each other until their last breaths..." Your daughter went on and on for another good three minute as you saw the blonde facepalm, walking to the kitchen. "I'll just leave you two now." Your daughter cooed as she ran up to her room upon her cellphone ringing. 

You walked to the kitchen to join your husband, sitting on the chair adjacent from him. "How was work? You seem really stressed." 

"My head kept hurting today, almost as if someone was talking about me." You went behind him to only began massaging his temples. "So liebe, what story were you telling her?" 

"One of the war-arc chapters in the book that you have in the drawer. The one about (Name) and General Beilschmidt. Isn't it funny the author made the General have the same last name as you?" 

You heard him strain out a laugh. "That book was handwritten by my Grandfather at the time of crisis, and he found a woman in the camp. At first, he said she didn't seem like one. But then she began showing more feminine traits that only gave him clues and hints. Soon after, my Grandfather grew close to her and developed feelings for her unknowingly. My Grandfather dodged a bullet for her and of course, they die together in the battlefield." 

"Who finished the book then?" 

"His comrade who picked up his book. Said he saw Grandfather's hand align with the woman's." 

"That's really... sad." You replied, tears dwelling. 

"At least they really had a happy ending together; now that they're in Heaven." Ludwig opened his arms to welcome you. 

You only pouted as you sat on his laps, leaning your head on his shoulder. 

"You know, Ludwig." You began, looking into space. "You resemble a lot of your Grandfather. Even the name." 

"You too. That woman's name is the same as yours." 

"This is almost as if your Grandfather is telling the future." 

...

You only mumbled a scary under your breath and smiled. 

You only then look up at Ludwig before he leaned down to kiss you, with you returning it with equal force; fighting for dominance. 

You hate to admit it; but you always lost. 

Everyone deserved a happy ending. 

General Beilschmidt and (Name) got one. 

And so did you and Ludwig. 

You felt General Beilschmidt and (Name) looking at you, giving you a small smile before they went off into the thin air, hands still entwined, laughing as they went. 

Your life was complete with him, right by your side forever. 
I'm sorry if it sucked. I can redo it with another plot if anyone wants me to. Please. Just tell me.

My brain is literally cramped with projects.

I'm so sorry.

You (c) ... Germany. Forever. See?
Germany (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:
Plot (c) =HillsOfSilence

Ultimate Ending: [link]
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Christina-Anna Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wait, how was Ludwig suppose to be born if his Grandfather died before marrying the female soldier (me?)
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DarkCupcakeQueen Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
I agree this confused me too. Wouldn't the general be more likely a granduncle?
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
There is a Ultimate Ending.
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Luigidoesminecraft Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Professional Writer
Woah... I wasn't expecting that all of the time in the battlefield was a written story.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is! Sorry if it's not portrayed correctly though!
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:iconluigidoesminecraft:
Luigidoesminecraft Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Professional Writer
I thought that it was pretty good! The only part I didn't understand (until I read the extended ending) was how Ludwig was born.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
•~• I'm sorry! ><
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:iconluigidoesminecraft:
Luigidoesminecraft Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Professional Writer
It's was great, though!
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ImmortalVantasy Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG GIRL WHY DO YOU ALWAYS WRITE SO MANY GOOD FANFICTIONS.
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
GURL NO. YOU JUST THINK THEY'RE GOOD. :heart:
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ImmortalVantasy Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Girl U KNOW EVERYONE ELSE THINKS THERE GEWD,
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
GURL YOU KNOW YOU THINK THAT
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:iconimmortalvantasy:
ImmortalVantasy Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
okai I dew.
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BlueKrystalSword Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
That was such a great story bro!!!! My heart string thoughHeartbreaker 
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :heart:
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Kira-Otonashii Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
THAT WAS SUCH AN AMAZING STORY!!!!! LOVED IT! YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!!! ❤❤❤❤❤
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! That means so much to me! :heart:
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Kira-Otonashii Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome!
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ThatRandomGirl7819 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
:iconcryingplz: It's so sad/happy/cute and all amazing!!!
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute ^w^
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MissRainTomboy Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
LOve the story, really nice! I cried with the ending.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
There's another ending coming maybe tomorrow<3
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MissRainTomboy Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
:DDD Please! Sure, the wnding will be cool
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here you go.

[link]
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have a lot to study for tonight, so tomorrow should be fine!
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BunnieXQueen Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I also really like this~~ ^^
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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BunnieXQueen Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here you go.

[link]
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BunnieXQueen Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you~~! :D^^
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ladybug37 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Thank you for linking this to me! :heart:
Beautiful ending as always!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here you go.

[link]
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
there's still another end!
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Foxkid35 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
yay a happy ending, you put a great twist on the storey well done
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Foxkid35 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
NP
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The-Tart-Queen Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student Writer
i feel better now! thanks! ^^
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!
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ZeeraNaiva Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This was really sweet! Thank you so much!!!!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! There's another ending to release the confusion soon.
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ZeeraNaiva Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Really?!?! Yayz!!! I wasn't too confussed, at least not really.
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well whatever it may be! Another ending is coming and spinoffs too!
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:iconzeeranaiva:
ZeeraNaiva Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Awesomeness!!!!
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Like Prussia.
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ZeeraNaiva Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
YYYEEESSSSS!!!!!!
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here you go.

[link]
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Ask-England-Arthur Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I cried...I cried like a little girl.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I cried like a little girl while reading too.

And I am making another ending - since this one confused some people. c:
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Ask-England-Arthur Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats fine with everyone, we all love your stories! ^^
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here you go.

[link]
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