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"This is the hero! Alfred F. Jones!" You could hear your laughter in the background of his voicemail recording, taped years ago. "Leave me a message because I'm too busy saving people right now. Swishpow!" 

His eerie tone frightened you, causing you to shiver and shift in your position on the sofa. You inspect the house one last time before letting go of the memories that once stored clear as pure water. 

You decided to leave a message for him, hoping he would hear. 

"Alfred, I am moving next week. Your motorcycle is still in my house. You always loved her, treated her like your wife and never did you ever leave it with anyone. When we broke up, you left it with me. I thought that you would come back and take it because it meant so much to you. Unfortunately, that wasn't the case. I tried to recuperate the relationship with you, but you were nowhere to be found. Just come before Monday to take it back. The landlord is coming to take the keys on Friday. Everything that I did to you, everything that I thought about you were incorrect. I just wanted you to know that I have not stopped loving-" 

The phone line made a noise as it spoke, almost as if it was voicing its final words. "Your message was three minutes long, exceeding our recording limit. If you would like to record more messages to send to the user, please try at a later time. Thank you for using HetaMobile. We appreciate your business. Good-bye." 

You wanted to finish, but was afraid to call him back. 

You only whispered into the air, finishing your recording to Alfred; speaking to nobody, knowing that he won't hear the last bit of your words. 


But that was okay. 

And the last bits shattered your already broken heart into ten pieces more. 
On a run for some America around here. I was about to write some more England, but then I realize that I've been writing tons of Englands on my phone. I wrote this up about two weeks ago.

I do not own any of the Hetalia characters, nor Hetalia itself. It belongs to Himaruya Hidekaz.

Have some more America soon as I busily study for exams, and do some commissions.

Feedback are appreciated, and wanted.

... Uhm. I'll be VERY busy this week - so please do not rush me for anything to be done.
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caprisunapples Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
So short yet so much feels
EATDEMCOOKIEZ26 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Heh heh Hetamobile, great story btw. X3
sayaikari Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
America!! I love you come back!! Nana (Delighted) [Elfen Lied] O//////O - emote 
LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student Artist
Meh!!! Major depression!!!!! ;^;
DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
more please.....? :iconbegplz:
ILoveXReader Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
please, write a happy ending to this <3
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well my feels hurt ;w;
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tissues for your hurt feels.

Pika-PikaCuteness Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
........alfred you son of a flying mint bunny i am going to burn all the burgers in the whole facking world...other than that...LOVE THIS STORYYYYYYYYYYY! Hit me riiiiiggghhhhttt here *hits heart* ^^
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! Thank you!
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