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"This is the hero! Alfred F. Jones!" You could hear your laughter in the background of his voicemail recording, taped years ago. "Leave me a message because I'm too busy saving people right now. Swishpow!" 

His eerie tone frightened you, causing you to shiver and shift in your position on the sofa. You inspect the house one last time before letting go of the memories that once stored clear as pure water. 

You decided to leave a message for him, hoping he would hear. 

"Alfred, I am moving next week. Your motorcycle is still in my house. You always loved her, treated her like your wife and never did you ever leave it with anyone. When we broke up, you left it with me. I thought that you would come back and take it because it meant so much to you. Unfortunately, that wasn't the case. I tried to recuperate the relationship with you, but you were nowhere to be found. Just come before Monday to take it back. The landlord is coming to take the keys on Friday. Everything that I did to you, everything that I thought about you were incorrect. I just wanted you to know that I have not stopped loving-" 

The phone line made a noise as it spoke, almost as if it was voicing its final words. "Your message was three minutes long, exceeding our recording limit. If you would like to record more messages to send to the user, please try at a later time. Thank you for using HetaMobile. We appreciate your business. Good-bye." 

You wanted to finish, but was afraid to call him back. 

You only whispered into the air, finishing your recording to Alfred; speaking to nobody, knowing that he won't hear the last bit of your words. 

"You."

But that was okay. 

And the last bits shattered your already broken heart into ten pieces more. 
On a run for some America around here. I was about to write some more England, but then I realize that I've been writing tons of Englands on my phone. I wrote this up about two weeks ago.

I do not own any of the Hetalia characters, nor Hetalia itself. It belongs to Himaruya Hidekaz.

Have some more America soon as I busily study for exams, and do some commissions.

Feedback are appreciated, and wanted.

... Uhm. I'll be VERY busy this week - so please do not rush me for anything to be done.
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CheetahBoots Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Da-dump da-dump da-CCRACK


Sorry, that was the sound of my heart breaking. TT ~ TT

MOAR! ANOTHER! SEQUAL
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caprisunapples Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Writer
So short yet so much feels
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EATDEMCOOKIEZ26 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Heh heh Hetamobile, great story btw. X3
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sayaikari Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
America!! I love you come back!! Nana (Delighted) [Elfen Lied] O//////O - emote 
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LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student Artist
Meh!!! Major depression!!!!! ;^;
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
more please.....? :iconbegplz:
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ILoveXReader Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
please, write a happy ending to this <3
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Well my feels hurt ;w;
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tissues for your hurt feels.

:icontissueplz:
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Pika-PikaCuteness Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
........alfred you son of a flying mint bunny i am going to burn all the burgers in the whole facking world...other than that...LOVE THIS STORYYYYYYYYYYY! Hit me riiiiiggghhhhttt here *hits heart* ^^
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! Thank you!
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Pika-PikaCuteness Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
Your welcome *-*
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whiterockshooter15 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANGST. *Hits 'merica over the head with frying pan*
:iconamericawhyplz: :iconsaysplz: OW!

walks away and throws frying pan at his head
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I would have done the same...
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SociallyAwkwardBunny Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconamericawhyplz:
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
feels are a horrible thing, aren't they?
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CaramelLatteDreams Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
-gross sobbing-
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icontissueplz:
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creand0r Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
*crying blood tears* Alfie... Come baaaaaack! TTnTT


I politely request MOAR~<3
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kairiburned1012 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Are you copying BEN or did you get the plague?
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think I'll be leaving it here.

It's the best ending that could be reached.
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:iconcreand0r:
creand0r Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
I wasn't asking for it to be continued... Just puttin' down the possible 'other blondes' that I'd enjoy being with ^^''
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry.

I'm really sorry. A lot of things are going on at the moment (hence tons of depressing stories).

There are a lot of blondes... >_> No doubt.
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creand0r Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
Aw, I'm sorry, hun...

If you need to rant or anything, just note me. I'm willing to listen.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^ Thank you, love.

Much appreciated. :heart:
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:iconcreand0r:
creand0r Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
You're welcome, darling~<3
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think I'm leaving it here.

I think it's the best ending.
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awe okay
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Hetalia1219 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
SEQUALSEQUALSEQUAL
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Kiddy96 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
TT^TT You should write more
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know if I will continue this. I mean, there is nowhere to continue.
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Lemon-Meringue34 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Please continue this!
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know if I will continue this. I mean, there is nowhere to continue.
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Lemon-Meringue34 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Well... I'm just gonna toss the ball around but how about Reader-chan could meet Alfred when she's older and America's still in love with her but she's with someone else and he tries to get her back? IDK That's just something I though of XD. BTW you and I have the same first name. I've met so many Emily's in my life. It gets awesomely awkward.
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I guess that could work... Then that will have wait...

Because I have a lab. report to do!

... Maybe I'll send you the link for it!
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Lemon-Meringue34 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Ahaha~ Thanks! It's ok I have like a ton of things to do too. XD take your time. I know it'll be awesome!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I just wrote another America x Reader just because. xD
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Lemon-Meringue34 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Ah seriously? I bet it's ASHAT PRUSSIA AWESOME
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
xD I write a lot of Americas!

And other characters.
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Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconmyplz::iconbigheartplz::iconequalsplz::iconexplosionplz:
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
D: Please don't explode!
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:iconoh-my-maple:
Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
My heart broke into pieces... I had to pick them up....
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I will help you. TvT
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:iconoh-my-maple:
Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :icondragonhugplz:
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FireGoddess122 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist
Where's the rest?
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is it.

And shortest piece.
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FireGoddess122 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist
Aww...
Well, good piece anyway!!!
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! Maybe I'll continue it as well...
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