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You had joined camp with your ex- of a boyfriend who had registered for you without consent. You showed up nonetheless, with a beaming smile. 

Your ex of a boyfriend was a German; tough, demanding and haughty. He always had something - just something for his country, like - a nationalistic pride. Whenever you talk about (your native country), he'd tinker your temper about how Germany was waaaaaaaaay better; and worst - in so many repetitive ways. 

Tonight was going to be the parting night, where the whole camp would have to sit amongst each other, look at each other and talk about how this camp for them. For you? Nothing but a disaster and a mess, or a simple blow of your mind. 

And being absolutely honest, this breaking of a business had already taken half of your mind off every other thing in the world that are way more important. 

Packing was a rigorous business; especially packing alone when you had unpacked four days ago with a partner. You tossed in your clothes, leaving the old habit of folding and being organized. 

No one has time for that. 

Tonight was the bonfire night. Also known as the sharing night. To share whatever and to speak whenever. 

It is the bonfire night. Also known as the sharing night. To share whatever and to speak whenever. 

People around the camp gathered around the glorious fire as it burned continuously with the spark of a match and firewood, enough to last a whole lively night. 

"I'm Angela, I work as a secretary in England, where I was also born and raised. I was raised to join the similar occupation as my mother, whom was also a former secretary in a law firm. I'm twenty-five this year, and enjoying my single life." 

"Do you plan to change that anytime soon?" A man in the corner bursted out. 

"No, and I'm happy with it." 

Angela spun the bottle, and it landed on the blonde German, who seemed extremely reluctant in sharing his personal life with the rest of the camp.
 
"I-I'm Ludwig, I work as - I don't want to enclose that. I am twenty-two this year, and I just broke up with my girlfriend," coos and sympathy from the audiences could be heard, as his blue eyes look into yours with a hint of linger. "I was born and raised in Germany, and know nothing more of the outer world - as I was told to be nationalistic all my life." 

"Do you still love your girlfriend, Ludwig?" 

"I do, I really do." His beautiful blue eyes shut itself, as if to remember all the memories that were made between the two that were meant to be. 

"Then why not tell her?" 

"I not only want to tell her that I still love her," he turn to you as the audience gasp at the twist of plot. "I want her to marry me; this arrogant, nationalistic, and know-it-all of a man." 

Ludwig stood up to walk to you. "What are you doing..." Harsh words were the only thing to cover those tears that were already ready to flow. 

"(F/N) (L/N), will you marry me?" 

"No, no..." The audience began to shout the opposition of your contrasting words. 

You shook your head, wiping your tears away. You'd never expect him to do this much for you, kneeling down on his knee in front of everyone, bringing his pride to death. 

"Yes, Ludwig. Did you really have to ask?" 

"I did," Ludwig replied as he slip on the ring onto your finger, placing a kiss on your lips transiently. "How would I know you'd want to marry an organized, arrogant person like me?" 

"Did you know how unorganized my suitcase is?" 

"I'm watching you fix that." 

You pulled him into another kiss as the audience was tossed in applause. 
This one is for ~Otaku-chan23! Thank you for joining my little contest!

You (c) :icongermanyispleasedplz:
Germany (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:
Story by =HillsOfSilence.
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:icondownshiftplus:
DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AAAAHHHHHH
ITZ SAH FLUFFEH
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Darklink2051 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
I'm german so he'd be saying Germany is better than Germany ^^' peinlich
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
shshhhhhhhhh Germany is better than Germany

aka no place better than Germany
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:iconmoonlightdragonrider:
So cute ^.^
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:iconrosyxd:
rosyxD Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Zats nice
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:iconmiss-inuyasha:
Miss-Inuyasha Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
can I write a Germany x Reader wedding that adds on to this story please:please: revamped 
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sure! If when you're finished, link it back to me so I can read it!
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Miss-Inuyasha Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
just finished it so read and enjoy.
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:iconlousiey:
Lousiey Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AAAAAAHHH YES GERMANY I WILL MARRY YOU~
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:iconbadassgermanchick:
badassgermanchick Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YESSSS
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:iconpokemontrainerfer:
PokemonTrainerFer Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Angela... KUROSHITSUJI. [pffft angels are now working as secretaries]
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becomeonewithrussia1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
So cute! And i don't belong to germany; i've had to explain this to him 5 times already!
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Kityluv Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Awesome! Ain't nobody got time for folding! x3

Buttt, I found an error. o3o

You said tonight is the bonfire night twice ;3;

"Tonight was the bonfire night. Also known as the sharing night. To share whatever and to speak whenever. 
It is the bonfire night. Also known as the sharing night. To share whatever and to speak whenever."

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The-Ninja-Potato Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student General Artist
when he asked reader-chan to marry him i was like
"im so confused"
then i heard a bump in my closet so i got scared
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Definitely Germany. ;D
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:iconthe-ninja-potato:
The-Ninja-Potato Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
oMF XDD
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Female-Canada Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Was the closet clean an organized when you checked it? If yes, Germany. If no... FRANCE/SPAIN/PRUSSIA/ALL CALL 911 WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN THERE WOMAN?!
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:iconthe-ninja-potato:
The-Ninja-Potato Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student General Artist
-slow claps-
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:iconfemale-canada:
Female-Canada Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Thank you! 
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:iconthatrandomgirl7819:
ThatRandomGirl7819 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
*speechless from all the awesomeness*
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:icongameramericangirl:
GamerAmericanGirl Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
Awwwwww~!!!!!!!! <3
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Animelover20014 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Student
How can Ludwig compare my native country when it's Germany!!!!!!!!!!! 
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:iconmiaroselove:
MiaRoseLove Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I literally fell off my couch. Loved this so much!
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FilipinaHetalian Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Halfway through the story I had to drop my Ipod, and exit the room to fangirl. XD My parents were wondering why my face was all scrunched up from the effort to not fangirl. :P
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's me all the time. xD
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shadowscar00 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Artist
WOOT
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:iconichigosakura17:
ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
No one has time for that. hahaha I love that line!
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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:iconichigosakura17:
ichigosakura17 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
I just wanted a cold pop
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DragonSkaterofFAB Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
When it said "leaving the old habit of folding and being organized", I said, "AIN"T NOBODY GOT TIME FOR THAT!" Then I saw the next line. My face=O.O I"M A PSYCHIC!!!
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MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm part German...and I'm all:FUCK THIS.*tosses clothes on the floor instead of in the basket*Yeah...I'm like Prussia...
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I fold my clothes nice and neat before I put them back in my closet!
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:iconthecoaxer24:
thecoaxer24 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Weird thing im part german and hate seeing things dirty
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
>.< Me too! I hate seeing anything dirty, or I'll have to wipe it like no tomorrow...
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:iconthecoaxer24:
thecoaxer24 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Ikr!? Its like a habit almost
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:iconninjanyankat:
NinjaNyanKat Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yes I am very Disorganized.. plz Help Luddy
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm extremely organized on the other hand! xD
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:iconfangirl5964:
Fangirl5964 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
This is even better than Pastaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
lol loved it XD
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
:iconwelcomeplz:
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Cocoberry123 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
...I'm part German ._.
So much win... xD
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaah...

It was... like... Germany insulting himself, yet complimenting...

Writers twist things~
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
That awkward moment when your German.
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Always makes it better.
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
XD Germany insulted himself
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:iconhillsofsilence:
HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Basically the whole point to get your heart again.
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Yep! XD
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Orion-Pax-117 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That awkward moment.......
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